wonder writing

A few days went past and there was a mouse that was so hungry. He smelt a delicious scent
coming from a shop. He had a little peak and saw some cheese, the mouse went inside the
shop and was thinking about an idea.  After about 5 minutes the mouse went to go and get the
cheese but suddenly The mouse just found out there was a mice trap on the cheese.
So the mouse carefully got the cheese and ate it all.